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Accepts one,

Denies the Other.

I face myself

Regretting ever finding you.

Forget it.

Your not worth the time

Crying over.

Makes me sick

Knowing I breathe

The Same Air you Do.

 

Your a coward.

Can't take Responsibilty.

Self-Centered, Conceited.

You dumb-drunk.

Nothing but a waste of skin.

Lies,

All Lies you told me.

You Worthless

Piece os Shit.

 

Thanx for being there Dad

When I needed you the most

 

 

NOT!!!

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This has to do with my biological father who was never there for me.

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  • Brazos silver member
    October 24, 2007
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    Sad, Amanda

    But it happens to oh so many of us. Our parents have us and then forget about us, as if we weren't even there.

    Hopefully you gained some strength or otherwise gained something positive from this situation. What's happened, happened, and it will never change, but we can move on.

    Deeply personal, heartfelt write, rage against the tide.

    Brazos


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    October 23, 2007
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    This is a very sad and unfortunate story.
    I am sorry that you had to endure such a
    rough time growing up. It's a terrible
    feeling not to lose a parent expecially,
    when her or she walks out on you.

    Thanks for sharing this here and good
    luck to you in all that you do! Thanks
    for sharing this here!




    Jeremy0826


  • MahoganyFlow
    October 23, 2007

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    This is filled witht such pain and emotion. I know the feeling unfortunately. Sadly your not just speaking for yourself but for many ppl in the world. Thanks for sharing!


  • tomisb
    October 22, 2007
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    we form our standards and what we believe is possible from our parents. thankfully yours was a wonderful guide and example. Count your blessing and forgive yourself for wasting time with someone less. Realize that at best you learned one more way to spot a loser
    Love Tom B.


  • Mizz HighHeel Class
    October 21, 2007

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    nice piece see i like when i can see difference all of us just been hot and you are bringing another formula of writing which is very well intended thanks for sharing

    sxy99


  • Ephiphany
    October 19, 2007
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    Deep my sister....loved the imagery in this.
    Thanks for sharing...wondeful


  • onesugar gold member
    October 18, 2007
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    Reading again for the group

    Excellent

    Love ~sugar~


  • ellipsist
    September 19, 2007
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    I realy like the beginning of this

    piece... very angry, but judging from the content very understandable...

  • onesugar gold member
    September 19, 2007

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    This is so sad and I too can relate to this
    Stay strong and don't let the fact he has never been there for you shape who you are.
    An excellent write
    Love ~sugar~

  • Ephiphany
    September 19, 2007

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    All I got to say is...

    I can feel you on that note...at least you know who he is, Ive never met mines and Im 34...now how Hot of a mess is that his loss not mines, thought, keep ur head strong. Great write full of emotions.

    E


  • Clinging-to-Life
    September 18, 2007

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    this was great...I can somewhat realate to this, though I never did know my biological father. This was a good write, i can definetely see the anger, along with the pain behind your words.


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    September 18, 2007

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    why i had to read this anger reason i say this because what you feel torwards your dad i feel torwrds both my parents they are some piece of what form of shit flowing out my ass i have no clue but this was a good poem i think yu did a excellent job

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