I wanna say i hate you
F~u~c~k that i do
I wanna take a knife and stabb,
The shyT outta you
I wish i had powerz like that damn spiderman
So i could push you off a building,
With you expecting my hand
Demonicly I'll laugh and scream out GOOD LUCK !
Then in a voice filled with rage scream -
"f ~U~c~K you"
you suQ !
I wanna say i hate you ...
F~u~c ~k THAT i do ...
One day I'll take a knife
And stabb the shYt ouTTa yOu !
Author notes
Leosha Dyer
A contest entry
- Short Poems About Anything (PW welcome) by Intricate Wordsmith.
550 points, ended May 28, 2008, 54 entries
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Comments
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Wow. Love it. Amazing. I love the rage behind it. It's jus.......it's a lot of what I was lookin for.
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Wow..
I can really feel the hatred, fascinating.
nicely done.
Good write. -
wow..thats a lot of anger in 1 lil poem.. i feel like that wen eva i get in an argument wit my rents u jus wana say FUCK U!! lolz..=p..i feel ur pain...btw thnx 4 da comment =)..
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Genius.
I think that this is unique. You put anger into a poem and made it jump out. I enjoyed this. It made me feel cynical. I like that I can relate to it and almost feel like I wrote it, or that it came from me. I know what that type of anger is like. Good job, no less. Wonderful usage of the Spiderman terminology. I liked that best.
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