I was so close to losing it and falling apart
But you stood by me and showed you had a heart
You have always been there for me since day one
I dont know what i will do if once again you say were done
You dont know how much i need you, you dont know how much i care
I never wanna lose you again, i couldnt think of you never being there
Im sorry for everything i ever put you through and im sorry I didnt know
Didnt know how much you really need me,didnt know how much you love me so
I love you more than anything and i never want to let you go
Your my everything, and one of these days you are going to know
Ill show you just how much i need you and how much i really care
Because i dont know what i will ever do if you was never there
I know i sometime upset you, and you upset me too
But if we work together, im sure we can get through
Because baby, your the world to me and so much more
A contest entry
- Love Pic Prompt by offlimits.
500 points, ended October 16, 2008, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Show me how much you love... by Nidaeah.
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Good piece!
Thanks for this piece. Ver nicely written. In the last couple of stanzas I did notice a few grammatical mistakes, but otherwise it is a very good write. Thank you and good luck.
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Awwwwww, very sweet! Nice write, thanks for sharing!
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lovely well done on a great write
regards offlimits -
Good expression of your emotions to someone special to you.
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i loved it to
I feel the same way about someone right now to. <3333
xo
kandy -
very heart felt. I love it
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