Fuck you
Good riddens
And forget all the pain you've caused.
[Your not worth it anymore..
I won't shed another tear...]
Fuck you
For making me believe all your lies
And constant tormenting games in my head
Making me weep lying awake in bed.
[This isn't a game anymore,
It's you or my relationship]
Fuck you...
Just leave me alone
Stop speaking thos evil things
And controlling my emotions.
[I just want to be free,
And happy]
Fuck you
I am through
With your rattling on
On how I can never do right
How everything I do is wrong.
[In the end,
I should have never listened to you]
Fuck me
For letting this depressive side to me win
And control my life
Convincing myself of all the bad things
And making me feel useless
Worthless
And lost.
[Goodbye Self-conscious
And hello happiness]
Please tell me what you think
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I think this was a powerful write. I liked how you began it, made me think of it as though you were talking to another person, but near the end it seemed almost like a conversation with yourself. It's like sometimes our self consciousness might tell us some things that may not be true and that can take away our happiness if we believe those things. Thanks for sharing and keep that pen flowing.
Haley Mary
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A kick ass poem
I loved how the whole poem was angry and sad... and that last line... where the word lost stands alone... it hits home perfectly. An amazing poem and I completely loved it!!!
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Awesome job! Does/Did this happen to you? Or it came as a inspiration of some sort. Or just because you needed to write...?
Anyways, awesome! Keep it up!
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It happened to me, it's a problem I am trying to get over or else I could loose many people.
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wow, this is some strong stuff, and you know i couldn't help but smile as i read it, you did a fantastic jobo n this, keep it flowing
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Wow. What is going on? you show a lot of emotion...xD so talk to meh about it if u want loveth yah Great poem btw keep up the good penning
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what be bothering you?
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