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nothing

Nothing lived for
                only died for.
Greed grasps for greatness,
glory fleetingly comes within a roar.

God is now no more
                on this Earth.
We have made gods to use only for
the dead, the destroyers of birth.

We must all put away old tales
                    lost in doom.
Others wail woes toward dead stars
as twisted tides turn with the moon.

Dare we rid ourselves?
            Striped blood flies high
while  shooting stars fall into fire.
Burning bodies cry with shouts of why,

are all unheard,
are  all insane?

All seem unaware; or worse,
                          without care.
Let the silence come with hearing,
for the land of the living is now laid bare.

Wounds bare witness to an ancient scribe,
                      while winds washed sand
with repeated tears, mourning many.
God, who we know not now, made us all just from one tribe.

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  • Musimwa
    December 6, 2007
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    Wonderful poem Annie, this is great. It is sad and straight to the point. Keep this up.


  • Debbie Hansman
    October 5, 2007
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    Such a deep write annie...I even went back to read it again.
    Nicely done!

    debbie

  • Brokenpen
    September 20, 2007

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    wow you touch on so many things here.. i am going to have to come back and re read this.. but is is a good write.

  • minto
    September 18, 2007

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    Annie, your alliteration pulls me through your poem
    like a loved one might pull me through a crowd of strangers.
    the subject is difficult, but it's almost comforting.
    but ah, i dont believe we can die without living.