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D.D.D

You let me down
The day the sun moved away
And the clouds rolled in
And you crushed my dignity
Now buried deep within
Disregard

I let you down
The day I just let you fall
I made you believe in
Everything I said and all
Then things came clear
Now you tumble into
This mess I made
Especially for your
Distress

We let this die
Don't you think
We make a perfect team for
Destruction?

Please tell me what you think

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  • Walking Tall
    September 19, 2007

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    this is brilliant....
    i love the idea of the 3 d's
    and they way each stanza is it's own little chapter
    in the story
    it's great
    well done!!!
    Seej