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Alter Ego




captured in your orbit

bound by unseen pull
of magnetic personality

absorbing the fiery glow
returning it for your approval



Author notes

prompt: gravity's grasp

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  • DancingRed
    September 25, 2007

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    Such a lovely take on the prompt, with a slightly darker undertone. You've made great use of the twenty words and filled each line with feeling.

    Thank you; I really appreciate your entry.

    DancingRed.