My citrus skin
bleeds euphoria
beneath September sky,
squirting autumn into
sliced orbs of confusion,
I drip into golden chalice
Author notes
mandarin peel. Jesuspoet32
A contest entry
- Quickie Cult - Invite Yourself - Round 1 by DancingRed.
300 points, ended September 25, 2007, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrite Mania 2 by Celticmoon.
450 points, ended April 7, 2008, 64 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Amy, you are a master of the short forms. The way your pen spins is always a pleasurable read. I love the soft sensuality that lies within your words here. You leave me quiet and without a word of suggestion.
Thank you for entering!
Best of luck to you!
Blessings
bel
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Don't worry; next round, you probably beat my dumb ass. Love the last line.
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Ooh, lovely. I like the new take on the bleeding image; your nature imagery is beautiful and powerful.
Thank you; I really appreciate your entry.
DancingRed.
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Oh wow..this is unique and really lovely. The words are so rich with imagery that it's breathtaking. Is chalice spelled wrong? Perhaps =)
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Yes it is, thanks for pointing that out and commenting
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oh wow a unique take o this prompt. wonderful job here. best of luck to you in the contest.
Tory
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