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Autumn

The summer has ended.
The weather is getting cold
that means the autumn
has arrived here.

The strong wind blows
the maple leaves falls
silently on the ground.
The leaves are everywhere.

We walk on the leaves
making the crinkling noise.
The colors of leaves are
yellow, red, and brown.

Since the tree is bare.
The colorful winter birds
will sit on the white branch
to give its the beauty.

Some birds flies down south
to be with the warmer climate.
They will come back
after the long winter.

The pumpkin does makes
more of the beauty of autumn
for us to enjoy
before the winter comes.

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  • fleur de lys
    October 19, 2007

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    Dear Katyv,

    A lovely poem about autumn which is a beautiful season. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.

    Hugs and love,
    Petratani


  • Chrissy03
    September 20, 2007
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    Very good write.


  • Olivias Violin
    September 18, 2007
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    The weather where I live is still hot but I wish that it wasn't.

    (I love pumpkins!)


  • Ephiphany
    September 18, 2007

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    Beautiful imagery

    I love Autumn, you have expressed this force of nature subperbly Keep writing my dear friend, I will keep reading.

    Ephiphany


  • ma belle
    September 18, 2007

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    Autumn is one of my favorite seasons to write about.. for some reason I keep swooning in circles to return to her. Thank you for sharing your heart's song. Hugs, ♥ Belle

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