And I go to you and try to clear up misunderstandings…
…You say I’m overemotional
…You say I don’t trust you
…You say I’m blind
And I come to you crying…
… You tell me it’s annoying
… You call me stupid
… You say I need to quit
And I come to you wanting a hug…
…You tell me to go find YOUR best friend
…You tell me that I need to cheer up
…You tell me you’re not in the mood to hug
And I come to you wanting to talk…
…You ignore my pleas
…You tell me to shut up
…You ride away on your skateboard
And I ask you to go for a walk with me…
…You skate ahead of me
…You invite three other people
…You just tell me, “No”
And I ask you to come over…
…You tell me ten minutes, but go to your friends
…You make up plans so you don’t have to come
…You just say “I don’t feel like it”
And I tell you I love you…
…You decide to kiss me
…You decide it’s time for a hug
…You decide you love me back
I ask you to prove it…
…You get angry and tell me you do
…You tell me that if I have problems to walk away
…You do something sweet
Why does my happiness revolve around how you decide to treat me?
Why was I so blind, why couldn’t I see?
You only loved me when you had nothing better to do
Well I love you baby, but I’m done with you
I’m done with being told I’m overemotional, that I’m strange,
Well baby I’m done, forget the feelings we exchanged,
Forget everything, starting this day
I’m gone honey, I have no more to say
What do you really think?
Comments
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Wow. Very well written, with an interesting take on life.


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Wow, this was great. Even though it didn't rhyme (which I have trouble analyzing), the flow was very maintained. I love how you introduced every situation, showing yourself and the reader how sad it really was, and then made a point that you had finished with the behavior listed above, even though you still loved. I enjoyed it, it's beautiful.




