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Yellow Rose

Yellow rose is kind of bright
This small flower is goregous
The scent is very light.
Smelling it that it is sweet.

The yellow petals are
silky and soft to touch.
It needs to be taken care
by trimming the petals.

It has the thorn that prick.
When we touch it
The thorn seems to stick
when we hold it for a long time.

This yellow flower has the two
different sets of colors
that it has no colored blue.
But it has the red tips

This special rose
symbolizes "friendship",
this flower did grew.
Anyway it can mean "falling in love".

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  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    September 19, 2007

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    Thank you--the yellow rose was my grandmother's favorite flower and your poem brings "happy" memories! Wonderful images and colors!

  • JustBreathe gold member
    September 18, 2007

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    The yellow rose is indeed a beautiful flower. I love the scent of roses and their "silky and soft" feel too. I can tell it's one of your favorites!


  • angelsslayer
    September 18, 2007
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    Very nicely written. Beautiful imagery,