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3 a.m.

3 a.m.

Waking I give thanks
For the unfailing
years-repeated joy and wonder
Of my wife’s hand
In my hand
In the night.

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  • Barry Hodges
    December 26, 2007

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    This was a touching little poem aboout bedtime comforts. I hope you will be not offended when I say that I was relieved to read the innocence of line 5. There is so much smut on this site you would not believe it.


  • Sandygram
    December 25, 2007

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    You have penned a beautiful and warm poem about your wife. Such a pleasure to read this Christmas morning. This is a day all about love. Thank you for sharing. God Bless. Hope you have a wonderful New Year too. Sandy


  • Barb Davidson silver member
    October 30, 2007

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    Just shows you don't need to ramble on about sunsets, roses and all that mush to say what's inside..

    Nice to 'see' you.

    Barb

  • pozo
    October 20, 2007

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    This is a beautiful poem which showed a lot of love for your wife.
    Thanks for your comment
    All the best
    Pozo

  • ashjoe76
    September 22, 2007
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    wonderful

    Sooooo impressive, and honest!


  • z etoile
    September 18, 2007
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    Short sweet and to the point... Good job


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    September 18, 2007
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    AW now this is soooo beautiful..love is so sacred,good Luck,God Bless....MM

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