Do you miss me when I'm not there?
Is this really love we share?
Do the flutters still appear,
whenever to you, I am near?
No longer in the playground,
real life is where we're bound.
Its easy to be swept along,
to think our love is still strong.
Look at me, stressing out,
mind suddenly full of doubt.
They really are so very bitter,
these pre~wedding day jitters.
Of course I love you,
to say no would be untrue.
Today is like a lock and its key,
coming together for eternity.
So this is it, our big day,
the best, in every single way.
My love for you I now bestow,
so let our wedding day flow.
Author notes
Apart from having children, I don't know of any other day thats so full of hope, as your wedding day.
A contest entry
- Have A Rewards Poem? Enter It Here!!!!! Almost Any Subject!!! by opaqueangel.
1225 points, ended December 4, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
1 - 5 of 5
-
I have to agree with you.beautifully written my friend.Although on my wedding day I had hope ofcourse.But I also had tennis shoes on under my long dress just in case I decided to run
-
Wow. I really like the way your poem flows. I'm not married yet, but I hope to one day feel the love that you describe so well. i really love the part about not being in the playground anymore and being boung to real-life. reminds me of a corey and topanga kind of romance. =) very beautiful poem!
-
Aw how nice. Haven't read a poem like this in a long time... so happy. Don't doubt the two of you share, because it's obviously very strong. Nice message, nice words.
-
Wonderful!
This poem bought back many memories of my wedding day. A day that I wish I could have once again. Now that I am no longer married I can really appreciate a write like yours because I can feel as well read your write. A many people wish that they can one day feel the bond that a man and woman share on that day. I just hope that when they do, they are not as foolish as I was and take it all for granted. Please keep writing and just maybe your work will inspire the young and the old who are in love and desire to be married. Fortunate for me I have since my divorce found a wonderful woman who I hope and pray that I can bring everything that a woman desires. I think that you love my latest write entitled "Mystery." Check it out and fall in love all over again! -
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!! This is so sweet, aside form the wondering and hoping that the other person is in the same place as you are, but even that is sweet because it shows truly how much your passion still burns for this other person. It is so great to have found this love and to have it returned to you by the one you feel it for, such and beautiful and miraculous thing! I must agree with your authors notes as well having children would be the other most wonderous day of your life! Ver emtional and very beautiful, I know I keep saying "beautiful" but its true! Great write and good luck in the contest!
Adding your comment:
1 - 5 of 5
