Spread your wings my angel,
And let me see you fly,
Take my hand and guide me,
Through the dark, starry night sky.
I feel the spark ignite,
As your lips touch mine again,
You are so special my darling,
Truely an angel amoung men.
Hold me tight in your warm embrace,
Don't ever let me fall,
Phil you mean the world to me,
My angel, my lover, my all.
Author notes
A short poem i wrote for my wonderful boyfriend Phil, i love you with all my heart.
A contest entry
- I Found It! Have you? by Nicole Cudworth.
900 points, ended November 6, 2007, 27 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - For Love by live in love.
500 points, ended October 9, 2007, 54 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I got chills as I read this piece and picture two angels flying across the night sky locked in a lover's embrace. Beautifully written. Your love for him shines through so brightly!
Thank you for your entry. Llvoe and luck in all you endeavor!

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Very touching! I hope you read this to him
I love writing poetry for my husband. Great write and good luck in the contests


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awsome
this is realy good i especialy like the fact that it righms not many poems do anymore

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your poems seem so true and i like them. Well comment me back sometime
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Not much else i can say just <3


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