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My Angel

Spread your wings my angel,
And let me see you fly,
Take my hand and guide me,
Through the dark, starry night sky.

I feel the spark ignite,
As your lips touch mine again,
You are so special my darling,
Truely an angel amoung men.

Hold me tight in your warm embrace,
Don't ever let me fall,
Phil you mean the world to me,
My angel, my lover, my all.

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A short poem i wrote for my wonderful boyfriend Phil, i love you with all my heart.

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  • Nicole Cudworth
    October 9, 2007

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    I got chills as I read this piece and picture two angels flying across the night sky locked in a lover's embrace. Beautifully written. Your love for him shines through so brightly!

    Thank you for your entry. Llvoe and luck in all you endeavor!


  • Angel Of Heaven99
    October 4, 2007

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    Very touching! I hope you read this to him I love writing poetry for my husband. Great write and good luck in the contests

  • dead-soldier
    September 21, 2007
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    awsome

    this is realy good i especialy like the fact that it righms not many poems do anymore


  • Phearax
    September 18, 2007
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    Not much else i can say just <3

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