Tingles down my spine
as your eyes seduce,
roving every curve
as their crystal blue deepens.
Nuances bouncing
like Cupid's darts
from coquettish smile
to husky whispers.
Temperatures rise
as flames ignite
the urge to unify
becoming acute.
Tongue's rotate
with spicy expectancy
every sensation
bursts from deep core.
Yet before the final
act plays out
minds have encompassed
celebration of equality.
In a list
A contest entry
- Total Seduction: Mind and Body (18 and over ONLY) by Celticmoon.
600 points, ended October 15, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Congradulations on your honerable mention. Exactly what love is all about. wonderful flow of words, and the detail is awsome. It was a pleasure.
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Woderfully soft and delicate. You have portrayed a picture of sweet and emotional love, tender and empowering while at the same time it is also emotional and sensually erotic.
Thank you for your winderfully penned poem
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beautiful
I have just finished reading your write and wish to let you know just how much i enjoyed the read.Your poem was very soft and sensual.Your word choice was perfect.The visuals within your written words are awesome.Congrats on the HM it was well deserved.I really liked these lines...
Temperatures rise
as flames ignite
the urge to unify
becoming acute.
Take care,
~Whispers~
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WOW
I loved this very much and am looking forward to readin alot more of your stuff.
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This was well written and sensual. You are so good at this genre. I loved reading the passion and the love I sensed and felt flow through every word. Well done on a great write and good luck in the contest.
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outstandingly written, so beautiful imagery and brilliant seduction, very well done xx
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Excellent
Very well done. Great images. So wonderfully seductive.
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oh wow this was very seductive and beautifully written with beauty and imagery
i loved how you did this well done and best of luck
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