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Treading Future's Oceans

Missing image
The past claws out
with talon's of capture,
arising from ashes
for mischievous games.

Not to be confused
with Phoenix rising,
dark and sinister
to block future's path.

To walk ahead
through cleansing waters
as serenity's hand
exposes epiphany.

Elysium lies
within our grasp
as ocean's of fervour
lap at hearts'shores.

In smooth footsteps of hope
tread with lightened spirit
as tentacles of evil
perish with faith.


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  • Roaddog Wolf
    September 28, 2007

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    very nicely done

    I enjoyed this read.I'll be reading again I read all of the poems at least twice. thanks for your entry and good luck
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  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    September 19, 2007

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    Wow--deep meanings and feelings brought forth from this poem! I love the images and the "mischievous games." Good luck in the contest!


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    September 18, 2007

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    oh weow this was an amazing take on the pciture and really gave it the write emotions that gave it a wonderful effect
    well done and best of luck