~
Center throng,
with eyes shut tight
energy flowing.
My natural one.
Self consciousness,
forced to exit,
as I consciously
block out the crowd.
Thoughts picture,
the practice hall
where I freely danced
with no one around.
The intro blares,
as I remember the moves
and throw myself
fully into the song.
My eyes open,
as the crown approves.
Control of stage fright,
has won me gold.
~
Author notes
OPTION #1= (C): Picture option.
do you think i can have the link for the picture? i'd love to add it to the poem (since i don't' have a membership, i'll have to have my sister do HTML to it.)
A contest entry
- For; Young poet contest society only! (13 and Under) by getsbetter.
1200 points, ended September 20, 2007, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
stage fright. how to over come it. (my way)
Comments
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You did a Very good job painting this picture, and your words had a great flow to them. Thank you for entering, and yes we will get you the pic...GETS
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i really like the message you send in this write. i wish you well in this contest that you have entered and am looking forward to reading more from you. viyanna rosemarie
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this was well penned here. I enjoyed the effect and the imagery you displayed. Stage fright, Yikes!!
best of luck to you, for i feel this here is a wonderful appearance
Tory
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cute
stage fright is hard to over come untill you just do it and realize its only in your mind. good job and good luck! the Shaker
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