Do you realise that you are foolishly innate
In the biological structure that he gave?
I wasted three thousand on straight teeth
And got crooked back bones instead
You go off and copulate
I'll place the tire even higher
In the bottom of my drawer lies a wooden hate
That internalises at the very sound of your cockney name
I have resurrected the white bones
And lived inside the green hearts
Of many elastic men driven insane
By symmetrically askew lines
And the custard flavour of rejection
Do you realise that you are cerebrally deviant
And critically alive?
The morbid fascination that I claim
As I prance solidly along the marked concrete
Begs the question of a vapid gun
An impenetrable phallic beauty
That I carry underneath these torridly layered clothes
Where most men skip under the distance of the white moon
I unhook planks of wood and touch my two backward front teeth.
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If I suggest that this is clever I think I kind of make the point that I don't much like it. I struggled with the juxtapositioning and couldn't make a true final connection. Just me I guess, sorry to be so negative.
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wow dude!!
this was really deep
and about crooked teeth..which i have!! and cant ever get fixed properly since their all too fucked up!
but this was awesome mate!
well done
Luv UnityHope
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Keep up the great work!
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