Nothing could be more glorious
Within a new days dawn,
Save my quiet moments for you
And sleepy morning yawns.
Slumber to sighs, indigo skies
We dream beside love true,
I can hear your heartbeat singing
With whispers, love me do.
So hard to bear, thoughts of leaving
Off to separate places,
Heartfelt kisses, tender touches
Still my soul embraces.
A kiss goodbye, until the night
We'll treasure once again,
I'll dream of you always my dear
For true love has no end.
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i really like this. slumber into sighs, indigo skies. it's resonating
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Awwwww..... How absolutely romantic!!! So filled with love and sensual beauty!!! I love this.....Your wording and flow was superb as well!!!
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This is a very beautiful poem. You and Eeyore did a marvelous job with this piece. I look forward to reading much more from you my friend. May God bless you in all that you do and write, and continue on with this amazing gift that you both have. Awesome job with this.
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soft and vivid at the same time...mirroring the sunset they would linger beneath. True truly does not
end. Yet again, that romantic flame flares from pen.
Blue
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This was such a beautiful poem to read this morning. Your words were so sweet soft and sensual. Lovely imagery. You both created a very heartfelt poem. I could really relate to these lines of truly missing the one I love.....
So hard to bear, thoughts of leaving
Off to separate places,
Heartfelt kisses, tender touches
Still my soul embraces.
I want to thank both of you for shsring . You take care. Sandy
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Love's tradition penned well
Of true love some themes repeat
The familiar of the bitter sweet
Like tender farewells and tears
And awakening to each other o'er the years
How oft can one write os such things?
Until the bell ending eternity rings.
Tecohe
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breath taking
a picture is more than a thousand words and in this case you have captured the essence within your words. It pulls at my heart strings and reminds me of the love I have for my one and only. thank you
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This should go on a post card! What a lucky girl!
This poem was very enjoyable to read. Perfect in that is is not too sing songy Like a Swinberg rhyme fest.
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This is a wonderful work of collaboration. The rhyme and flow are perfect and smooth as if written by one person. Very well done. Loved reading it.
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I read this three times The smoothness of outstanding
the rhyme is perfect and what I like most is the pace
For some reason the pace that the wording allows makes this very plesant to read. Dam good!
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Ah yes, this is very sensual indeed. I love sunrises and sunsets especially when shared with the one I most adore. The words you both shared here left me both breathless and *sighing* at such beauty. It made me feel so warm inside and I just want to go and hug my husband right now while whispering that "love me do". You made my day with this write and if I were to read only one piece today I would have been happy to have stopped here first. Thank you for always sharing your wonderful gift and best wishes in the contest for both of you. Love and God bless you my friend, Joyce
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Every line holds aspecial thought within my mind and soul in love and friendship everlasting and believe me our unique love is unconditionally true with no end in sight for it reaches beyond infinity xoxoxoxo love you always and more my dear friend and bro xoxoxoxo thank you for sharing you with me and being a part of my life xoxoxoxoxooxx
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excellent
Powerful creation. You two truly did an increadible job. Such an exquisite creation.
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Awesome collaboration!!!! The picture is gorgeous, and somehow the two of you just made it disappear! Seamless piece of love and adoration! Wonderfully penned!
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What a gorgeious poem,
You flowed well in this one not
just with lyrics but with love.
Thanks for sharing i loved this!
Slán Dolores x
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Beautiful...smiles
Yet another beautiful penning my dear brother..smiles
Excellent work , both of you...
Sighs..smiles
Peace
~A~
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What a lovely colaberation of two poetic minds.
beautiful
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With whispers, love me do.(do should be too maybe??? lost my thought..
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other then that throwing me off it was perfect. Ilvoed tthe rythmn and flow of it and I think you both did a great job. Keep up the great work.
Love ya T, and much love and peace to your partner.
Always
Your fan and special friend
Tory
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oh wow this was amazing and so beautifully written with affection and love and emotion it was penne dwith beauty and i loved it well done
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"...still my soul embraces..."
You have captured the essence
of love unending, no matter the distance.
A soft, gentle piece, showing
vulnerabilty, yet perseverance.
Aesthete
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Love this it gives that emotional wrench you look for when buying cards for the nearest and dearest! Superb use it wisely!!
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This is such a beautiful poem of two hearts parting, knowing true love stays within, wonderful imagery and great title
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Now this is love in a nutshell, what we all strive for in our own hearts song, a whisper echoed between two hand in hand . Excellent choice of words that engulfe the emotion within each writers heart. well done both of you,.If tis was a contest write, I would have bowed out gracefully.
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At that time how romantic...Indigo skies...You share such a sensuous loving relationship that these special times makes the day go brighter..It is so wonderful that you encourage in your love for one another that true love is possible.."Slumber to sighs indigo skies, we dream beside love true, a kiss goodnye until the night, I 'll dream of you always my dear for true love has no end"......So much like you Tim....endearing words to the love of your life....and so special!Magnificent!
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