Camouflaged at the front and the back
Are the notes of love and hatred in the stack,
To label to play the music behind the rack
Bundled at the back that emerges to ransack!
Are these the soothing lubricants or lotions
That amplifiy the overflowing poignant emotions
And adornsthe vanguard, devoid of notions,
Although crammed with notations within quotations?
The howling personalities, in reality, cry
And the anger of performers made to fry.
Laughter heaves along till happiness, dry.
But from the unknown milieu that is wry!
Pleasing poems rehearsed without words
Amazing dialogues contemplate as swords
From the Gods to the poor landlords
This backdrop operates as harmonious I pods!
A contest entry
- BACKGROUNDS!! 2010 TOTAL POINTS AWARDED!! by Stingersinger53.
1500 points, ended September 22, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Oh my you took this to a leel of intellectualism that i love. Ok, so i noticed you are a professor...how well thee professes. Smile.
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Hi Lavender!
Thanks for your time to view my poems and stamp your impressions there, lady who is very fair and poses the comments very fair and with great care! Hope you go through all my poems, when you find time and make me happy. You can contact me at mrajarams@yahoo.com or mrajarams@gmail.com. I do profess what poets and playwrights did confess. Yessss I teach English literature. What prfession has lady lavender before, on my mind she started to wander?
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this is very interesting and i reallly enjoy how u wrote it....thank u and ..............i really like the rhyming..it isnt pushed
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this is a very creative poem. I like how you wrote it
Thanks for sharing
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Finally returning the favour - sorry I didn't comment earlier.
This is an interesting poem, I especially like the rhyme scheme. Interesting topic to write about. I don't have an Ipod myself though.
Thanks for sharing!
Annie
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its awesome...how properly described...woh!!! you are a great poet...ill try to check out your other poems as well...they must be equally cool!!! GREAT JOB!!!
-Mekhala
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You have done such a marvelous job of describing the meaning of songs and why we choose to put them on our i pod. There is great depth here. congratulations on the trophy, it is well deserved.
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as an ipod owner (which I now regret due to Itunes being so user unfriendly) this was guaranteed to make me smile. Good rhyme and flow.
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I really like the rhyming in this poem. It was very fun to read and I can honestly say I can appreciate the effort of this
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I really liked this poem. I don't have an ipod, but can still relate to the jumble of emotions the songs we choose hold. congratulations on the trophy!
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Fantastic imagery..
Any thing music is always a first with me..smiles..
Congrats on your win..smiles
Peace
~A~
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Thanks for entering my contest! I just love the music notes!
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A wonderful poem on the scurge of todays society (I am not a lover of Ipods)
Your rhythm and rhyme were excellent as were your choice of words.
Thanks for sharing with us....Sue
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wow
I really liked this. Great rhymn scheme and vocab. My favorit part was deffinitly the first stanza.
thanks for the read
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