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Sand's Loom

Dally quiet in the sand's loom,
long passed the child's rove,
woven sand flattered by stars,
swirl the ocean's floor

Author notes

h. stars on sand
kkatie55

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  • DancingRed
    September 25, 2007

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    yes, you've done justice to the prompt; your images really bring life to the page. These twenty words are lovely.
    I'm not sure if you meant 'quiet' in the first line, though.
    Thank you; I really appreciate your entry.

    DancingRed.


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    September 18, 2007

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    This indeed was a splendid piece.
    Thanks for sharing such, alot said in few words.
    Amazing.
    Goodluck to you
    Tory


  • Naridill gold member
    September 18, 2007

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    Very beautiful piece. Added alot of depth to the prompt chosen. Well done.

    Much luck


  • islekine gold member
    September 18, 2007
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    Write on!

    Good luck in the contest!
    *PEACE*