Vacations over,
seasonal love
come and gone.
Sand, Sun, Surf,
left behind.
But, I'm not done yet,
sowing summers seeds.
Author notes
Prompt: g. summer seeds
Griswold
Love You Tory.
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie Cult - Invite Yourself - Round 1 by DancingRed.
300 points, ended September 25, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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'seasonal love '- love that thoughtful phrase.
Your poem really brings to life the fun and love of summer.
Thank you; I really appreciate your entry.
DancingRed.
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wonderful flow, short and simple,excellent job!
thank you for sharing
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Very well done here on the prompt.
Great flow and imagery indeed
Love the wording and rhythm.
Best of wishes to you
Tony
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well done
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This was well penned love. Admire your wit in such few words.
Z Missing you baby, Good luck to you.
Love you always
Tory
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oh wow this was a beautiful write and so beautifully taken from the prompt you really made it into something beautiful well done dad and best of luck
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Very enthralling piece, so short and simple, yet the relative prompt to this piece adds beautiful imagery and creative response.
Much luck
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great sadness
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Well done.
Very. "Seasonal love" brought back some great memories.
Good luck in the contest
*PEACE*
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this is nice, gris we both used though in different ways, the same prompt.... hmmmm I think that prompt will be popular.... and you did it justice... well done and good luck in the contest
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