BLANKETS OF SAND
Planets collide
Bursting into flames
Billions of galaxies created
Come crashing down
Leaving thousands of stars
Upon blankets of sand
Author notes
20 Words
Prompt: Stars On Sand
Jeremy0826
A contest entry
- Quickie Cult - Invite Yourself - Round 1 by DancingRed.
300 points, ended September 25, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A most beautiful, powerful piece of poetry; I love the imagery of out of space.
It could also be interpreted as an overall metaphor for human life, which is great.
Thank you; I really appreciate your entry.
DancingRed.
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This was a great take o the prompt, its different, with such beautiful imagrey,
Planets collide
Bursting into flames
Great begining
Good luck in the contest
~Dark
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Ohh this is so beautiful! Simple and short, but peppered with awesome images. Really brings it to life in my eyes. I love your prompt too!
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This was a wonderful piece you penned, great take on the prompt, take the person straight to where you want them. Great job and best of luck to you
Tory
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Beautifully said, the words flow smoothly into each line and it really just reaches out. A beautiful poetic piece formed from a interesting prompt.
Much luck
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nice scary
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Another great write!
Good luck in the contest!
*PEACE*
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Nicely written J-Man, a great take on the chosen prompt, Pssssttt, dont forget your name in the box.
...Scott
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