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Regreting you

We were something
Everyone knew it
We were happy
Facing the world together

But it couldn't last
You got bored
Tired
Wanted something new

I was just another girl
Thats all you saw
Blinded by what I thought
Was love

Now I'm alone
Left to figure it out
But theres nothing left
Nothing to decide

I can end it now
It would be best
For both of us
You'll understand soon

Your no longer a threat
Just a regret

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  • angelelectra
    September 18, 2007
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    amazing

    that was such a beautiful, sad piece! every single word was powerful and full of pain. There is definitely a sense of loss in the poem. The part i loved the most though was that last stanza:

    "Your no longer a threat
    Just a regret"

    WOW!!

    Take care and keep penning!
    Neera~