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And Life demanded her will of virtue






Oh babe,
your heart was pounding
and my breath was hot
fire churned between our farenheight bodies
a tug and pull on extacy
scratched away flesh and bliss escapes my mind,
kisses that make your lips go numb
you held my face so tight with so much wanting
fiveOclock shadow brushed my shyness to the curb
and a blanket of flames bared down around us
you glowed with such sweet intentions,
giggles pranced throughout the car
though our thoughts lacked that of innocense
in a parking lot we were teased beyond our grasp
If only we had had blocked off walls

stiff adventures of Downtown Richmond
dangerous whereabouts of a late night cruze
steamy hands and pleasant smiles
oh what an escapade of exploration
your bodys' got me wanting more.

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  • PassionsPromise gold member
    September 18, 2007

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    Wow,

    What you have so far is really good here.
    I like your forward progress, and I wish you well.
    A very wonderful start, thanks for sharing.

    PP.