Hunger and need, hot desires
Touches sent us reeling
Lust and riveting motion
Spinning atop me you focus
My wetness excites you so
Door’s wide open
Breast to breast
Sigh to Sigh
I feel you hard against me
Losing sight of the whole damned world
Soaring, hold me tight
The fire within
And finally two ignite
Lovemaking, sexually defined
Lighting up every inch of us
Catapulting me to unreachable heights
Stopping, freezing time
Something tells me you’re mine
*Rdrl*
A contest entry
- Get Me Out of My Sad Place by KissMeGoodnight.
700 points, ended October 1, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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erotic..very
"...unreachable heights" you got that right.
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OoOoOo well that was nice lol.
looove
'Losing sight of the whole damned world'
love it! that line is sooo poweful.
great write -
Beautifully written with great imagery. Best of luck in the contest.
Bravo
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