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Paradise

Upon the shores of tropic seduction,
sparking infernal flames of combustion,
where ebbing tides carry desires,
fanning the heat of our sensual fires.

Your touch, the pleasure of paradise,
and kisses sweet with moans you entice.
Let us climb this euphoria, in lusty spasms,
crashing heavenly waves in blissful orgasms.

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  • Devilish Apatite
    September 18, 2007

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    This is exactly what I picture when I picture a steamy rendezvous....as always, hot job sis!


  • Dove Moderators member
    September 18, 2007

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    Wow, I can see this took gold and very well deserved it, nice nice piece here my friend Best wishes always


  • Cerulean gold member
    September 17, 2007
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    And you was worried! lol
    Congrats on the win.

  • PerfectImperfection
    September 17, 2007

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    Very intense write of passions peak! Excellent flow and description to entice. Just beautiful! Best wishes in the contest!


  • Cerulean gold member
    September 17, 2007
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    A lovely poem.
    It's steamy yum!

  • poeticweaver gold member
    September 17, 2007

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    Nice,

    A lovely piece sis, thanks for sharing here, and I wish you all the best within the contest!

    Bro Timothy


  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    September 17, 2007

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    Wonderful piece here! I love the imagery and flow in this. Well done and all the best to you with it in this contest!




    Jeremy0826

  • PassionsPromise gold member
    September 17, 2007

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    This was awesome. I loved this piece full of great imagery and the flow and rhyme was awesome.
    great job and best of luck
    Tory


  • poeticweaver gold member
    September 17, 2007
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    Hey Sweet Sissy.
    All The Best..
    You're Awesome Anyhow, You Know It!
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