Blacks and reds,
Florescent against landscape,
Ever changing gothic romance,
Genius and inward beauty,
Fall victim to their bastardized opposites,
Both try for their lover's heart,
Only one is bound to win,
The other must live alone,
Never to feel the love denied,
Liquid roses fall,
Congealed to the floor,
As one attempts with all might,
To bring his love her dreams,
Acting not of good or evil,
But the love he feels guides him.
He askith only for one thing,
To be loved,
Taken from his world of torment and death,
Accepted for his soul,
Not condemned for his physiological differences,
Tortured since birth,
Hidden from the world,
He loses his love,
For she chooses looks over love.
Author notes
Can anyone name the reference?
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Comments
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Wowzers!!
Now this is certainly different Sweet One
I've been off and on but wanted to see how You were doing also ingest Your words of Wisdom~~
For some reason I keep seeing~ like The Hunchback of Notre Dame also Phantom of the Opera....
Powerful verse You have brought forth for us
to read
Thank You for sharing Your Talent!!
Hope college is going well for You also
Best wishes to You always
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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good write
This piece is interesting and makes me wonder who the poem is refering to. can you tell me who or is it fiction? I can relate. Great write!
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I very much like the emotions rising through out this poem...
Being rejected for bad looks!
An excellent attempt!
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