The razor is so close to my painfully scarred wrist.
I don’t know what to do now. I hope that I can resist.
Nothing seems to be true, yet nothing seems at all fake.
It's all down to this now, the blade that decides my fate.
Every now and then, I see what it's like.
As I fall closer and closer to that light.
The light dims and I return and wake.
And I’ve realised, everything is fake.
People don’t understand me, or what I’ve become.
All they know is that cutting shouldn’t be done.
What do they know, they don’t live my life.
So now I feel I’ll change this razor, for that knife.
Callum Ridley
Please comment. I dont know if I'm any good at this...
Author notes
painful surrender
A contest entry
- Suicide (emo, death, sad, . . .) by DarkLotus4Life..
300 points, ended February 2, 2008, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Painful Desires by Lost Vampyre Angel.
1000 points, ended March 6, 2008, 46 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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yummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
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you are very good at writing,
i love this poem,
i know how you feel,
people dont understand your life,
good luck in the contest,
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wow it certainaly deserves a goldie well done I can relate to this it really very good thankx for sharing your work with all poetry
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This is an amazing poem. I can really relate to it. Great job.
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Fear of the unknown, that is why people do not try to understand, if they have not been there done that or felt as you have they never will.
You are no different than anyone else, for everyone has their hidden secrets and additions, so just more noticeable then others.Raw write of deep feelings. Very good and thought provokingly dark.
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I love this poem, i really relate to the emotion felt in this piece
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this poem is awesome add me to yur friend
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hey i posted some new stuff
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your really good
i really like it
it really well written
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the fact that this may be how you feel can be really sad and lonely. i like this not because it rhymes but because it shows your emotions.
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you are really good i can realate 2 this 1
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any good..you're great!!!
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Thank you. This is the first time I've shared my work with anyone so I wasn't so sure how people would perceive it. It seems to be ok though.
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