Love is just a state of mind
Love can sometimes be unkind
Love is emotion from the soul
But sometimes gets out of control.
Like butterflies that flutter round
It takes you high above the ground
Where it leads you never know
But you always want to go.
Love can come at any time
And it doesn't cost a dime
Love can make you act insane
But sometimes leaves you full of pain.
Like Cinderella at the ball
It makes you feel ten feet tall
Love is the answer to a prayer
But it isn't always fair.
In love's a funny thing to be
Love's not something you can see
Brings happiness or jealousy
In love's a funny thing to be.
A contest entry
- Love - almost any thing goes by Mujina.
450 points, ended February 12, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - What About Love? by GypsyEyes.
500 points, ended July 30, 2008, 132 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - What Is True Love by misticmoonlite.
700 points, ended July 19, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love Me, Love Me Not by Mary Jane..
575 points, ended November 26, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love is a vestigial word by Morrigan Trinity.
550 points, ended December 3, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, • Add to finalists list, or remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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loves echoes through gently and touches lives ever so passionately, thank you for this entry, good luck
Lin
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very nice poem its rather cute, the rhyme is showed throughout the poem, and the stanza each are the same lengh[about] overall very much nice poem, best of luck in the contest, all my love, keep penning, kitty xxx
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wow amazingly done.
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well said dear fellow
enjoyed your poem
thank you
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so true
bringing the soul into this poem was a smart move, it does move the soul to be inlove...also it can be very unfair, it can flip to the opposite in a wink of the eye. nice job once again.
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execellent poem you have penned here, i really like it and so much can be read inbetween the lines. Love sure is not something you can see...... I have to agree on that.
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smiles sweetly
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very good
i like the pace
it's so neat
a sort of "how to fall in love" kinda poem
something like that
but
i think that is the a unique talent of your literary technique
i feel all a-flutter, if you will after reading this
which is not my cup of tea
really enjoyable read
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Sweet.......
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this poem is awesome! and really so ture. line 7 was a little confusing to me, though. i like how you use the title to have people thinking about it throughout the whole poem and the you tie it together at the end.
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loves the concept but wats wit the rhyming. makes me think of a pre-school poem
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this s nicely done the ryhmn and flow is ok i enjoyed reading this (:
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well ain't that the truth very very good. keep up the great work.
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I love the rhyme in this poem!! YOu have rhythem in your writing in which most people lack!! Keep up the good work and feel free to check out my page anytime! Jess
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this has the making of a great poem, its just that the rhyme kills most the emotion portray in this poem, thanks for entering
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very great its got great detail to me love hurts i learned that the hard way
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This is so very true. Another brilliant write by you. Good luck in the contest.
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Very True. The inspiration is forced though. I do that too sometimes. Decied that i just want to write and don't nessesarily get anything great. It's a still a nice peice though.
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I so agree with all the sentiments and feelings you have described here, though it's a while since I've felt them! Mind you if we felt like this constantly, our blood pressure would be sky high. Nice observations on the love thing. Good luck in the contest.
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the rhyme scheme seemed forced in some places but other than that I really enjoyed this poem.
Keep it up!
~cheers~
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