Mind is the blade forged
from a million blows
Mind is white hot metal,
radiating from within
Dark ore rooted deep
within the earth mind
is the edge, licking blood
from a careless finger
the smith's sweat evaporating
off the anvil
Mind is
potential turned firm,
focused beautiful brutality
the echoes of warmth
and force of flesh
Comments
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unique!!!!
I like this alot....
you have a very unique style to your poem right here.....
the mind is a very powerfull thing with that I must agree .....
each line flows nicely to the next......
none of the lines seem forced ..
seems as they came naturally to you as you wrote.....
your very talented I must say.....
was nice and smooth !
great write!
i cant wait to read more of your poetry!!!!
xxlisajazminexx
much love and respecte!!!!!!!!!!
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