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no choice

I expected all this
Why did it have to become true
"what should I do?"
-"Just stay here…"-
"you know when I said
That no one has ever treated me this way,
I meant it.."
Yet still I reached for the dagger
And I cried while I held it to his neck
The hardest sacrifice
But roles have changed
And I see his hand on his gun now
I still can't cut through
I give in to be the sacrifice
Then it all went black

-"I really liked him"-

Author notes

this is inspired by an episode of NCIS, here theres an undercover federal agent who gains the criminals trust and friendship to catch a higher criminal, and when the guy finds out his so called friend is a federal agent he decides he has to kill him but couldnt because he really considers him a friend, but the federal agent couldnt let his personal feelings in the way and eventually shoots the guy.

ok, lol, thts it

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  • mcrsk8ter
    September 18, 2007
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    i love ur poems they have good meanings


  • Walking Tall
    September 17, 2007

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    hmmm it's a great show and a really great (but sad) theme....
    it really get's you thinking
    'what would i do'
    brilliant write!!!!
    Seej


  • crystallynnbradford
    September 17, 2007

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    this is really good....i watch that show too and i think that you did a great job with this piece and portraying the emotions....very nice