Hello my angel.
What's it like to fly in Heaven?
I feel so far away from you
But you can bet that I'm still watchin'
You soar so high.
Sometimes I wish I too could fly
Right by your side.
Hello my angel.
Sometimes I wonder if you see me.
Does my heart shine in your eyes
Or is this wishful thinking?
What's the truth?
The one thing I know is that I need you
But do you need me too?
Hello my angel.
I know I'm far from perfection
But I know that my love is pure
If you'll only stop and listen.
Give me a chance.
Don't leave it up to cirumstance.
Trust in romance.
Hello my angel.
I've got so much love to give.
If every love poem I wrote about you
Would make your heartbeat skip
It'd never end.
Not one poem would be pretend.
You're my best friend.
A thousand times I'd die for you.
I'd stop the entire world if I had to.
You're worth it all and so much more.
My friends might think I'm kinda nuts
And I have to agree because
I know I've never felt like this before.
My angel I can't promise you
That you'll have fame and good fortune
But I can promise I'll always be yours.
Forevermore.
Hello my angel.
You can bet that I'll keep waiting
And whenever you come down to me
My heart will finally stop aching
For your love.
For now I'll watch you fly above
And I'll dream of what we will become.
I'll keep praying for you because
I'm in love with you
And this is what you do to me.
Author notes
Inspired by the song "Hey There Delilah" by the Plain White T's.
CONTEST STUFF:
-"smile because your never know who's following in love with your smile."
-Option 8: "a song inspired poem."
A contest entry
- POEMS AND LYRICS ONLY by crystallynnbradford.
365 points, ended September 18, 2007, 12 entries
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this is really sweet! and pretty. i love the idea of the whole thing. it was well written.
the only thing is, i noticed that at some points you lost the rhyming, i dont know if that was purposely done or not...but whatever, it was great anyway!
thanks for entering!
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Very nice, I really loved it!
I like the repetition of the title line particularly.
Good luck in the contest =]
Hannu x -
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Thanks gypsy! I'm glad you enjoyed reading this poem! 
-Tim
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Nicely done. That is a very good song. I really liked this one a lot. Thanks so much for entering and good luck to you.
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Thank you...it's my fav. I'm glad you enjoyed this poem and thank you for hosting this contest.
-Tim
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I agree with the previous poster below me. This bestows upon me a feeling of warmth and a feeling of being safe. Who ever it is that you wrote this for is truly lucky to have you around. God bless you my friend and your poem in this contest and with each thing you do.
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What a wonderful uplifting piece you have sent to me. thank you so much!
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this was a really great poem
it was really sweet and i just loved it
it flowed really well
and i could really feel the love
thanks for entering and good luck
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LOVV IT!!!!!!!!
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:'( , I love that song and i love this poem more. This was really nice. sooo sweet. good job! I loved it. _nora
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Ahhhh! i love this! lol i sang rather than read it! greeeat job! and I was even happier that there weren't any corny words in it. i was a little iffy about until I read it. you told the story and at the same time made an awesome poem. much luck in your contest.
May Your Muse Forever Inspire You...
K.V
((loved this lol))
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this is a very sweet and beautiful poem...I loved the vivd imagery and the descriotion....I found this to be a really enjoyable read...thank you
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This is very beautiful, and sweet!
~K~
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