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i float in space
nothing worries me
everything is calm

A contest entry

serenity

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  • McRae by nature
    September 20, 2007

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    Very blissful. That is the feeling that overwhelmed me as I read your words. I would guess the emotion is probably something the likes.
    Great piece

    Carrie

  • TooRainbow silver member
    September 18, 2007

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    How soothing!

    I get such a sense of serenity from this write! I can't thank you enough for entering it! I can feel the weightlessness: "i float in space", the release and freedom: "nothing worries me", and the peace and safety: "everything is calm". Your verse is so elementary for an emotion so difficult to achieve and maintain. You make uncomplicating things seem so inviting! Using lower case and no punctuation is a good idea as it supports the focus, even keel, and simplicity experienced in a state of serenity. Awesome job on this! Thank you again!
    Sheryl