Imagine thought,
her velvet petal,
cradled circle, spinning sunlight,
born to echoes speaking tongues,
as flutter now, in forever's nuance.
Wind blows taste,
passing summer's invitation,
sipped in buzz of honey,
singing sensual whispers,
sighing sky
in truthful lullabies.
I am strumm,
flowing eye,
following playful fragrance,
blushing meadow's grassland.
A contest entry
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475 points, ended September 17, 2007, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
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1200 points, ended September 20, 2007, 36 entries
Honorable mention
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This is quite a strumming of something other than strings here, although you are good at that too, Mr. Mountain.
Very subtle. Beautiful poetry
Congrats on the gold
Thank you for this entry...
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oh yes, gold indeed....such a circle lullaby of sounds and iamges.
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WOW! Sigh~ This is just so so beautiful! So wonderfully penned...
"Imagine thought,
her velvet petal,
cradled circle, spinning sunlight,
born to echoes speaking tongues,
as flutter now, in forever's nuance."
OMG. This is just excellent. I see gold. I know why it's there.
Namita
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This is lovely and I glad that Mary recognized this poem with a gold trophy. Congrats, my friend. I too like to use flowers as metaphors or just simply in poetry - they are the earth's stars.
~ Nicolette
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WOW! Congrats on the gold. I can see why it won...This is so beautiful..
"Imagine thought,
her velvet petal,
cradled circle, spinning sunlight,
born to echoes speaking tongues,
as flutter now, in forever's nuance."
Brilliant
Lynda
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YOU have the most keen eye for the grandeur in metaphoric writing. You allow the reader to see and endless eruption of beauty through your words. I am in awe of everything of yours I've read thus far. You encourage me to do better each day. Beautiful! Congratulations on winning the GOLD cup...this is exceptionally worthy. Outstanding work that makes me sigh.
"born to echoes speaking tongues,
as flutter now, in forever's nuance."
SIGH~
Much Love & Respect ♥
Renee
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oh, this is so tranquil! your words run as liquid diamonds of the paper, friend! this is another amazing write ... such serenity and peace within your letters, such vivid images you craft!
thanks for sharing!
--Asfand
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ohhhhh very lovely-
i really love the sounds and ebb of this piece- very very nice- glad to see you here again
m
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