You are my warmth from the sun
the one that brighten my days
lightens my heart, sooth my soul
the breeze that cools me
when the night comes
wrap me in delight
and kisses me good night
You are in every corner of my world
the only sight, I care to see
the wind that surrounds me
the air that touches me
and sends chills down my spine
You are my every breath
You are my life, my everything ~~~
Author notes
Simple words of love, For Someone ~~~
A contest entry
- Romance of the Heart by Liquid memories.
525 points, ended November 26, 2007, 32 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - "The best thing about me is you." by Perfectly Imperfect.
300 points, ended April 7, 2008, 18 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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ichigosama
wow, this is a great write. although i have to wonder about the title being i wrote a poem under the same title but i see now it's two different poems. great job and thanks for entering!!!!!!
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ichigosama
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This is such a beautiful write. I can relate so much to feeling this for another. Lovely imagery. Well done and thank you for entering x
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This is really beautiful. Is it any coincedence that yesterday was valentine's?
I don't think I can say any more on this that hasnt already been said by everyone else before
Never ♥
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This is truly a tender and beautiful message you radiate to the one you have written this poem for actually. Well done!
Thank you for entering the contest,I wish you the best of luck!
Leander -
SWEET FLOWING WORDS OF LOVE. success in the contest
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Excellent
You are my warmth from the sun
the one that brighten my days
lightens my heart, sooth my soul
Love this
Sometimes words will come to us
that are inspired beyound our own modest mind
This is beautiful, you were blessed to have made the words
Rick
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love is wonderful
You always show your love in specisl ways. This is no exception, Bubba
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loving sweet words of love, care and deep feelings for this person. i wish you all the best and lots of happiness, my friend. this was soooo sweet!! loved the flow of it.
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Lone:
Thanks for wishing me and my someone, lots of happiness.
That is so very nice of you.
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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Indeed they are beautiful
words Joyce, absolutely. My every breath, my life, my everything...wow, now this will make me cry as I listen to you speak these words softly to your Loved one. Great job, thanks for alway sharing the beauty of your talent.
Ephiphany
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Ephiphany:
Thanks for reading and enjoying.
It's always very nice to hear from you.
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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Always nice to have someone that makes you feel like that! Beautiful work as always Joyce!
Jeremy -
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Jeremy:
Thanks my friend,
yes it really is nice to have my special someone.
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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Hey Twinsy,
Oh how I can relate to this wonderful read!! You sure can write some of the most beautiful words of love!!! I hope he knows hoooooo lucky he is!! What a great job you did on this!!!
and lots of love!
Nyetta
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Hey Twinsy
What's up with you today?
Thanks for reading, I know you can relate.
Hey I love the new picture, it's very nice.
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Love Ya,
Joyce
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Excellent!
FOR SOMEONE? Why just someone? Very sensitive POEM.
One question? What does "You are in every corn of my world" mean? How are you JOYCE?
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Kennth:
Hi My Friend:
I meant " corner " Silly LoL
Thanks for pointing out my mistake.
Thanks for reading, you are so sweet and funny too.
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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wow, this is so beautiful, i wish i was that someone Joyce, lol
great job
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Hi Marctheman:
LoL, keep wishing, LoL.
Thanks so much for reading, you are so good to me.
Thanks for saying this is beautiful, that means a lot.
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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Hi Joyce
beautiful words of love flowing like a soft breeze on a perfect day
I am sure your words lift him in love, he is blessed to recieve them.
much love,
Michelle
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Hi Michelle:
Thanks so much for always being so nice.
These simple words are how this remarkable man makes me feel, every single day. I am sure you know how it feels.
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Love Ya,
Joyce
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