I imitate images in intricate idiosyncrasies
Trying to tolerate terrible times today
Believing boisterous braggarts brings balance
Over obvious obstructions of overzealous offenses
Has hollowed halls halted heroism
Did dutiful delicacies dulled danger
My mind misrepresents minimized morality
Lonely laying lofted like little lizards licking lilacs
Willfully wallowing with wasted waffling
Now, no nonsense negates normalcy nor nepotism
Promise peace pending political pandering plus plentiful posturing
In a list
A contest entry
- Are you an adept author? ..... Attempt Alliteration by Heavens Child.
700 points, ended September 25, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this is an intresting form.You are very creative.
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thanks - it was one of my first attempts at alliteration.
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Excellent read & write
What an excellent piece you have here, This form is not my forte. Yet I admire those that do it well and it makes sense to the reader...Keep up the good work, enjoyed the read...
"Espeically loved the topic about just sitting around doing nothing; the lazy lizard waiting on a hand out from family or friends"
...........Novy
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Thanks Novy - this was a weird one and i really don't like doing this. But I like trying anything unless its just a waste of writing. And there is a lot of easy forms out there like that.
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