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I Hate You Dad For What You Done And Still Do

Hey Dad now you're 65 years old
Still you’re not bald
You have a big mouth to speak
And you’re still strong you can run without any stick.

With your 2 big eyes don’t look at me that way
Fuck your sex salve I’m not gay
Make her pregnant if your penis gets erect and if there is sperm in you testicle
But oh! She’s over 40 and has no eggs present you can just fuck her hole.

Oh Dad with me you like to fight
You kick me I’ll kick your ass tonight
I’ll make you naked and tie you up the tree
You do anything masturbate or pee but let all the people see it free.

When you hurt my mother and call bad words to her
I’ll hit you more and more
I’ll put petrol on your pubic hair and light up the fire
And watch you cry out in pain as roasting your younger brother.

The things you did to us since I was born I’ll always remember
The hate for you will always be forever
You’re not my father but a filthy monster
For you there’s nothing left but anger.

Hey Dad you never gave me love or made me laugh
I’m stuck in here and my going gets tough
From you I want to hide
And I often think of committing suicide.

For all the troubles and problems in my life
I’m this close to end my life and I have no clue why I’m still alive
And even if I die my soul wouldn’t rest in peace
I’ll come back to you and I’ll show you what revenge is.

I cannot take it anymore when I hear you bark
There are many street dogs outside our house just go and fuck
Yeah I can see one dog outside so Dad best of luck
And I’m proud to say “You Suck!”

Thanks guys for reading
For some of you this might be disturbing
I can go on rhyming
And tell you the things he did and still do without recalling.

For the nasty things I said
Some may think I’m gone mad
But you won’t understand because GOOD is your Dad
And I wish DAD, I never had.

I’m 20 years old
And this is my story I told
You did all evil deeds
And if I’m married I’ll never do this to my wife and kids.

Life goes on
The past years and childhood is now gone
All I know is my dreams will never come true
I hate you dad for what you done and still do.

-Shuberth Dias-


I Wrote This Poem On 8 September 2007 12:46:13 PM When i Was 20 Years old

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  • N e a r
    April 21, 2008
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    You really let it all out in this write, didn't you? Well, it helps relieve some of the stress. Not all, but something of the sort. There's a lot of force and anger in here, and it really shows... The language and the beats of the poem suggests such a struggle.. a battle for survival. It leaves me without much to say.
    Thanks for your entry.


  • jusaliltrubl
    September 20, 2007
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    perfect

    :spechless"


  • Pain Angel
    September 17, 2007
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    im so sorry to hear this... just let it go.