Fluttering from side to side
zephyr's carried
fall's blush
to gentle carpets.
Echoes of laughter
reverberate through time;
we danced and skipped
through radiant hues.
Buried in season's
bed of foliage,
leaping in wonder
to bury our next victim.
In passion's resonance
we make love today
under trust's
glowing blankets.
Author notes
Prompt- (50 words)
Autumn Path © Pamela A. Lamppa
Myles Standish State Forest, October 2006
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A contest entry
- Autumn Path - PIF Quickie - 48 hours by Pamela A Lamppa.
1750 points, ended September 19, 2007, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Dang zephyrs
Have a habit of showing up downunder I guess!(smile) Under trusts glowing blankets...strange and thought provoking. Hmmm. Glow from the sun? Colored by the Autumn Leaves? Winters greenish glow? So many to choose from. -
Adored the whimsical romances of Autumn's offering .. sweet, subtle, flowing and congrats on your bronze - truly worthy of recognition. My best, Belle
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Congratulations Alice
So, you, too, were twitterpated! Half your luck!
A lovely poem.
Ron.
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NICE
I loved those zephyrs carrying fall's blush to gentle carpets. Beautifully expressed.
And the memories expressed gave me such a nice nostalgic feeling. Truly a wonderfully orchestrated piece. No wasted words; each and every one has hit its mark.
Splendid entry. Wonderful work poet, you have just raised the bar. ~Pamela
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This speaks to me of always trusting there will be a tomorrow. That concept just seems to blend well with
Autumn; it's descent and faith that Spring will breathe life into these veins again. Title is perfect. Blue
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This is a really good poem. keep them comin
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