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[ It's the smile I give you ]

It's the smile I give you
When I wake up in the morning,
Tangled in the blankets again,
And you're reaching halfway for my hand,
And halfway for the captured covers.

It's the look I give you
When you kiss me on the forehead,
Assuring me that we're like two pieces of a puzzle,
And there's only two pieces in that puzzle,
And we couldn't fit better.

It's the touch I give you
When we're alone and whispering,
Excited about the coming day,
And so oblivious to the world,
And so content with where we are.

It's the way you render me wordless,
Speechless,
A writer without an answer,
A writer without a reply,
A writer with only a
Smile,
A laugh reserved for the days when I'm home
In your arms.

It is timeless,
It is love,
It is hope,
It is us.

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  • Kd
    September 30, 2008
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    Enjoyed it


  • BitterDreamer
    September 16, 2008

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    It is timeless,
    It is love,
    It is hope,
    It is us.

    so sweet..so romantic...so perfect.
    your words made me belive you worship the groud your lover walks on and the same to you.
    thanks for sharing!!

  • Virgoan silver member
    October 22, 2007

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    There's a lot of colors in this piece. The seemingly melancholy sound of this write makes a reader wonder and long but smile in a glimpse of a moment.

    Nicely written piece

    Keep writing.

    VIRGOAN