Drifts along the path of fallen snow,
Opaque fairy in the white dust.
Onto dark stones flow her thoughts,
And no one to watch her sit.
Snow White, are all the faeries gone?
The world to be magic in her eyes,
her eyes of gold and sparkling death.
Runs her fingers through the ice,
for ice shows her picture of lies.
Snow White, where have you gone?
A contest entry
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650 points, ended September 17, 2007, 43 entries
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Comments
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I enjoyed this, being a darker side of a kiddie classic. You portrayed the image of a very lonely Snow White, which proves that even Disney princesses can end up alone.
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Wow this was beautiful! I cannot describe how this made me feel, but you have really captured my attention in this short, well written piece.
It has alot of imagery, and description, aswell as emotions. I feel you have used my title well.
Thanks for entering and good luck!
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