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--Insantiy--

hearing voices in my head
haunting me alone in bed

shaking, shivering, oh so cold
all the secrets finally told

in my head they all echo
going madder that I know

floating objects, things that bleed
just some rest is all I need

Play tricks against my mind
leaving sanity way behind

scared and lonely I begin to shake
a recipie of fear I unknowingly make

there's sharp little pins underneathe my skin
tearing it open again and again

seeing colors of purple and yellow
tinted reality wherever I go

locked alone deep inside
this insanity's a horrid ride.


~Madi~

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  • theflamepoetess
    May 14, 2008
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    wow

    this is great it shows such emotional depth and the rhym is just amazing, you have so really nice write, this piece i can relate to in every aspect it speaks to me like, like a hidden memory distant but yelling inside my soul, i love this!!!