This gift from you was the best I had ever receive
It gave me a reason to smile, a reason to believe
It was perfect; it made my heart sing
It meant more to me than anything
At last my childhood dream had come true
Then it was gone leaving me sad and blue
A moment of anger, you threw it against a wall
I watched it shatter, I watched the pieces fall
I'd always wanted one since I was a child
Now it's shattered along with my smile
I wonder if you really understand how I felt
How this carrousel horse made my heart melt
It wasn`t much, but it meant the world to me
My heart sank as I dropped to my knees
I picked up the piecies and started to cry
For a brief moment I just wanted to die
There's nothing left to say, I can't even scream
My carrousel horse is shattered along with my dream
January 3, 1999
Please tell me what you think
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WoW!!! this is really nicely written. Its full of emotion and very heart felt well your doing so well and yea i will be putting up new stuff i did today sso let me know what you think. miss u guys very much LOVE ALWAYS & FOREVER CHOLOLOLO
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So very sad
Yes so much today young people take on way to much responsibilities unknowing their minds and their life situations arent ready for it . Then a child so innocent of this world takes the full hit and being just a babe never has a chance .To all the young people out there that think love is a bed of roses all the time please dont take the roll of being parents until you can take care of yourself and have a proper marriage and the love to hold it together. Love is not sex they are two different things all together .Its not something you play with or can change your mind at any time .For in love a child is made not a toy you can just cast away
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Wow this was really really good. Very touching and full of emotion. The flow was really good as well. I dont' know if it can be better. Thanks for the read.
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THanks Ale E. I am glad that you liked it. Sometimes I just don't know what to say so i write instead. Thanks for reading
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Very emotional write. I love the way it flows. Have I been in a situation sort of like this. I enjoyed this read. Thanks a bunch.
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