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total failer

as I get further from "home"
I had expected to feel better
but I just feel worse
worse because yall pushed me
worse becase I let yall
tempers flare, and moods change like the wind
but love never fades
I hate the way it happened
such a fruitless battle
but now because of this
I have an opertunity to start anew
to get rid of my negative patterns
to change what made yall no longer trust me
a little compasion, a little less predgidus
I know I went to jail
I know its hard to look past that fact
I tried to show yall I had matured
I tried to show yall I could succed
I literly gave yall my blood, sweat, and tears
and for what you didnt even notice
and than yall will see
I am not a total failer

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  • Broken Machine
    September 30, 2007
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    Great positive poem.


  • Zaedyns Mommy
    September 26, 2007

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    You wrote this very well Tim, and even though Adam and I arent together right now. I miss ya.lol. I hope everything gets better for you soon, and just remember, no matter what ya have argued and faught about, Adam will always be there for you whenever you need it the most, and well I guess I am too.


  • chyld of the shadow
    September 18, 2007

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    dude you CANNOT feel down. you are it bro. i miss you so much. we all do. mom, glen, dustin, breanna (of course), joey, tina, tom, my fuckin dad misses you, now if that dont say somethin i dont know what would. i hate not havin you around anymore. i just get bored. the duputy sherrif even misses you. im just sayin, if you wanna come back. stay with me.. i can make it happen. just somethin to fall back on if things get to rough. things are allready rough but im gonna manage. you have to look at donnas page (Persephones chyld) i dont know what to do. i cant sleep at nite bro. please tell me somethin man. i cant even think straight anymore. its killin me...


    • timberwolf1313
      September 19, 2007
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      yo man i might be coming back yo dont tell anyone. shit just aint right round here i mean its all good but i feel lost. i dont know what to do. your dad misses me holly shit. i quit smoking pot (for now.) man i just need your # so i can talk maby set shit up better you know your damn nere the only reason i would come back right. man i just need to quit bitching and suck it up oh yea dude a fucking carten of dorals here costed me like $50 this shit is nuts.
      peace out hommy