I remember the blood,
from an hour and a half ago
I dont know
who I am
when I look in the mirror, I say "Damn, who am I?"
Sweet razorblade,
let the blood cascade
I flex my wrist,
It hurts like hell,
why?
I cry
I love it,
I hate it,
Sweet razorblade,
let the blood cascade
man, I am deep in my shit,
I need to take a hit,
to forget
to have smoke fill my lungs,
and mist my mind,
to find
peace
Sweet razorblade,
let the blood cascade
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my wrist hurts
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Comments
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wow! very intense, thanks for the share..


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Ah, I remember my depression years. Fear nothing but the fact that youre clueless of your identity. No will to live, and when the blood made sure I was still around, figuring who I was didnt come around so much nicer.
Anyways, very poetic, simplistic to a point but well read and an emotionally powered. Excellent job <3

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i really like this,..cuz well,..cutting is like a drug, full of regrets but that never stops you,
"I love it,
I hate it," that is so understandable,
i love this poem


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This is rich in emotion and a very sad write! It is well written and thanks for sharing!






