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Sweet Razorblade

I remember the blood,
from an hour and a half ago
I dont know
who I am
when I look in the mirror, I say "Damn, who am I?"

Sweet razorblade,
let the blood cascade

I flex my wrist,
It hurts like hell,
why?
I cry
I love it,
I hate it,

Sweet razorblade,
let the blood cascade

man, I am deep in my shit,
I need to take a hit,
to forget
to have smoke fill my lungs,
and mist my mind,
to find
peace

Sweet razorblade,
let the blood cascade

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my wrist hurts

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  • passionate-poet
    November 3, 2007
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    wow! very intense, thanks for the share..


  • Saturninity
    September 21, 2007
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    Ah, I remember my depression years. Fear nothing but the fact that youre clueless of your identity. No will to live, and when the blood made sure I was still around, figuring who I was didnt come around so much nicer.

    Anyways, very poetic, simplistic to a point but well read and an emotionally powered. Excellent job <3


  • eatingupyourmind
    September 17, 2007

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    i really like this,..cuz well,..cutting is like a drug, full of regrets but that never stops you,
    "I love it,
    I hate it," that is so understandable,
    i love this poem


  • captain howdy
    September 17, 2007
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    This is rich in emotion and a very sad write! It is well written and thanks for sharing!