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Seeing isn't believing

When something bad happens
It makes me wonder about Him
I cry and get mad and ask why?
And sometimes He responds
With a little wonder
A new flower in the garden
A kiss from that person
A baby born
And I know

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  • star wars fanatic
    September 23, 2007

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    Simplicity at its best. You captured the essence of Christmas here in a way, hun. Thanks for entering and keep up the great work!


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    September 19, 2007

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    His response? I am here, with you in the nitty gritty of life. Seee what I made for you today?

    Lovely poem, well balanced and faith building.


  • Mirthryl
    September 17, 2007

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    The sweet wonders you describe are all messages of love from Him. Some things I didn't understand for many years, other things I still don't understand. But I can trust He will see me through them all.

    Very encouraging write. Perfect title. Great ending. Very nice!


  • Rose Angel gold member
    September 17, 2007

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    Lovely,,,We can often ask why,,,But we;ll understand it better by and by...And then something happens that is a joy, a gift.......It balances out......Good write!