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Hell Bitch

You seemed surprised by the way
my hands could so easily turn you to putty
when I touched you.... there....
stroked you.... there....
Never have I lived with shame.
No regrets,
no looking back.
Your eyes are mine and
my teeth are at your skin.
Bruising,
bleeding,
clawing,
breathing
heavier than before.

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  • Symptom.X
    September 24, 2007

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    yeah i agree with shy-girl. the title of this bites. good work though. kinda reminds me of a certain someon i know...


    • October.
      September 26, 2007
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      Yeah, well.... Come up with a better title and I'll change it.

  • x ShyGirl x
    September 17, 2007
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    I like this, except not really the title. but thats okay, lol.


    • October.
      September 19, 2007
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      Ha. Thanks, chickadee. I couldn't think of a title, so I settled for this one.