From the suprise in my eyes
and when I hold them in my arms
"Their adorable!" I say
to when we bring them home
Seeing the tears in there eyes
"It will be ok" I wisper
Their body's musclar
Their braveness so stong
their copper colored fur
Their small feet
their winkeled furry body
ready to be blown up with kibble, water,
exersize and I whole lot of love
From their first names Chester and paddles
to their final names Simon and Shuster
I always wished I could be them
exploring there adventures
But their is something I must remember
Changing my life just to a dog IS and adventure
* This is a true story I do have two dogs named simon and Shuster.
A contest entry
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425 points, ended October 6, 2007, 12 entries
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Nice!
Good luck in my contest!
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The only pets I ever had was dogs.
Your poem is really cute, love the
way you wrote it. I love little new
born puppies, but don't think I would
want to be one.
loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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Bravo! This is awesome piggypoetry and true too! Chester and Paddles....hmmmmm....I think you gave them MUCH better names
You have a good command of words, I can actually see you holding those precious puppies and enjoying them now ~ and for many, many years to come.
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Excellent job on this piece. I could see them clearly. You did great here
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nice poem
good surprise as you lead the reader along . . nice sentiment . . like "copper colored fur" . . nice write !!
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Very cute. Thanks and good luck
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thank you the people that commented!
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teehee this is really cute, it reminds me of kathryn's poem about when they went to china to get you! by the way I am kathryn's friend katie.
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You did a really nice job with this piece thank you for shairng .Best wishes
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