Feel my heart beat next to yours
I lean closer to you
I look into your eyes
And see how much you love and care for me
I can tell by the expression on your face,
That you see the same in mine
You are the guy I've been waiting for,
And I hope I'm the girl you've been waiting for
Author notes
I enjoyed writing this. I hope you enjoy reading it.
A contest entry
- In need of a girls written love by daruvial.
300 points, ended October 26, 2007, 14 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Just tell me what you think
Comments
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awwe, so cute.
I had that moment right before that person told me they never wanted to talk to me again. I hope your situation wasn't as bad as mine.
a solid sentimentally scripted piece, congrats.
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Love should be forever
I know that you are very young and life has twists and turns . First love is so intoxicating and sometimes we dont always use our best judgment . For the boy promises to be there forever . Only when you are so young forever could be a month or so .Dont give yourself away to just anyone make sure before you do that you are out of school and on your own .For so many young women have had such heartbreaks for the young men promis them everything in order to get what they want . Only to move on for when your young life is like a candy store once you take off the wrapper its gone
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