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My Favourite Colour Is Red

Does my blood please you?
Do my driving skills tease you?

Sidle up!
Raise the roof!
Coffee cup!
Bicuspid is a tooth!

These tears, this sweat, are all for you
Floss with strands you've left, do I bore you?

Bit and bridle!
Champing and then I choke!
Pee on a motel Bible
Because Hal Lindsey's a frigging joke!

Punch a nun
Get it done
Damn! This is so much fun.
Take a dive
Chew endive:--
It's my last kiss you'll survive.

Da Vinci wrote backwards...
The black widow eats her mate
And it is accomplished!

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  • sidewinder silver member
    December 29, 2007

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    sometimes ...we as people must let things go... never let our anger eat us alive...and sometimes move on with life itself!

    Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
    Bill


  • Lute
    September 26, 2007

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    is this blasphemy? I think this is blasphemy. I probably shouldn't read blasphemy. What if I get blasted? Like with a bolt of lightening from God or sumphen? Nopey I think it was Bob Crane's motel room.

  • Suzanne Dia
    September 17, 2007

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    Funny? Bitter in a way to me. Feels like I'm fed up with shit and have to spew it out so I can let it go..not as funny to me as sardonic..which I suppose in a way CAN be funny..just a lot anger mixed in with the humour. I love that I come to a poem call "My Favourite Colour is Red" and find a blue background..there is a nice irony in that that seems to fit the rest of the mood here very well.


  • Little-Marshmallow
    September 16, 2007
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    Ha ha nice poem


  • Chet W.
    September 16, 2007
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    haha

    lmao very funny


  • SilverMoonFeathers
    September 16, 2007
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    haha very funny GioXD

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